Sunday, 8 February 2015

Eels

There was a huge eel from the Danseys river , who love to slip through nets and eat ganzeys lizards he was long and slippery and really quit scary , for he was not a marvelous pet
( this is a limerick poem ) 

6 comments:

  1. I love It who you can describe an eel so much in a poem

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  2. sounds like you hade great fun

    get well soon : (

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  3. What a great limerick, you have really mastered the rhyming pattern of this type of poem.

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  4. Well done ruby you could probably do better than me

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  5. well done that is awesome you have improved so much since last year

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  6. at the start I thought it was some random stuff about eels but it was a limerick

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