Monday, 23 March 2015

Quick write
All alone in the world of dark orange tree leaves and hills that stretch far beyond the land , bear trees stem from one to another , then black smoke came from just behind the plum tree so I follow it until I see my train the one that I use to live on I still have the label on the left side of me , then looked up
I remember this is the last time I will ever come back so I ripped off my label  and ran across the train tracks holding a golden leave in my hand.

My goal ) is to put my punctuation In the correct places do good verbs to make my writing more interesting.  

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